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Recently my sister was added to the insurance polciy for my car (not in my name, im a nominated “under 25, male, green P’s, 2 speeding fines, 6month loss of licence, 2 accidents” driver)
NRMA sent a REFUND on the policy because they now consider it LESS OF A RISK because it has a female (17yo, < 1yr exp.) driver nominated on the polciy, haha WTF! <3 NRMA
Found i had feed back for a 3000Word Essay i had to write, love this guys comments:
Topic: Gestalt Theory
Due Date Your essay was submitted 1day late and 3 marks have been deducted as a result. Length Your essay is much too short. 3000 words were required. Your essay is only just over 1000 words. Content The Essay Itself In general, your essay is fairly well organised and presented. Sections and paragraphs are mostly well structured and information and arguments are generally well presented. Overall, the essay is interesting even if it is a little hard going in some parts. Conclusions Your conclusion could be improved. It does not sufficiently summarise where you have come from and what you found. Grammar Your essay shows a good mastery of English grammar and spelling. References Inline Referencing You have not shown any references to sources WITHIN the text of your essay. Simply listing the sources at the end is not sufficient for this type of writing. (Not true, i put 1 in!)
Reference List When listing references at the end of your essay you should ensure you list only those references to which you actually referred within the essay (That’s why they are called references). A list of interesting books etc which are not necessarily referred to in the body of the work is called a bibliography. Plagiarism No evidence of plagiarism has been detected. General Comments What can I say, Philip? You have apparently decided to do as little as possible with this.
haha, What can i say, he got me pined!! Watch This Space.
Well i was down at the corner shop the other day, i know like wtf right? and dont u hate it when peoples fones go off while ur trying to watcfh a movie, i mean i dont turn my phone off but i might get an important call, but these other people….whos gonan be ringing THEM!!!! and i especialy HATE that guy who decides to get up, sprint down the isle and go talk outside, what a looser, i dont care if ur sister just died or somthin…turn your phone off!!!!!!!!!! and whats worse is those peopel that SHH you….there jsut making MORW NOISE..dont shhh….throw stuff at em like jaffas, or 50c coins!! P.S. People please stop speaking and/or typing like this, your slaughtering the english language.
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me at a corrner shop, but meh…. when this old guy jumped in front of me while i was trying to buy my tim tams and coke (breakfast of champions)!!! like….OMG how RUDE! 
i hate it when people do that, and anoither thing i hate is when your doing soimthing, like sitting there with ur car door open, and someones trying to get in there car, and they jsut STAND there and dont say anything…who does that…its not being polite or whaat-evver….stand up for yourself!!!shift one!11!internet!! Blackrock 4tw
